Near the start of the email, there is a place that says
I believe it would be better written likeMake web a safer place
Near the end of the email, it saysMaking the Web a safer place
which doesn't really match what it says near the start of the email, so maybe it can be changed toStay secure,
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Thank you.Stay secure,
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